Using my character "Archon Dranath" on this test and see how it goes~

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon [not possessed by a Demon, but he is a Demonoid]
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[x] They are physically strong
[x] They have a rare hair/fur color
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[/] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[/] They have lost one/both of their parents [his parents have been dead for decades]
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[x] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature [He is a Demonoid, Human soul, who got granted Demonic powers]
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are. [Archon is over a millenia old, but looks like a 21 year old]
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters

more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly

say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[/] They are very intelligent [one can't say he is very intelligent, but more intelligent than a average human, for example.]
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[x] They have a 'special type' of soul [His soul is a "mix" of Human's and Demon's soul]
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts [kinda a must for a Demonoid]
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[/] They have a rare/unusual name [you can say that "Archon" is a unusual name.]
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[x] They are from a different country to where they live [Archon's origination dimension is Hell Of Blazing Fires, but travels around different worlds and

dimensions all the time]
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[/] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[/] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear [Bracelet of His right arm, that has a huge Aquamarine on it]
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 13

Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[ ] They have a short temper (Depends on her mood.)
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others (not all the time)
[ ] They are emotionless

Final Score is: 13

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a

bit ^^

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may

be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26< -Mary-Sue

That "Test" only Ranks my Hax character as Balanced... odd shit lemme tell ya...